Unit 5 feedback

Hi Heaven, thank you for an informative post this week on anxiety in early childhood and the complementary medicine technique of yoga. I liked how your page was organized, all of the sections were clearly labeled and  contained the required elements. Each of the elements were full of useful information.  Like the rest of the class, your page has continued to do a great job of creating a page that follows an easy to follow and logical format building from a sound foundation of the description of the condition and the treatment, then finishing with the pros and cons. I understand the difficulty in finding adequate research to support a topic and I see how that influenced the definition you chose to use in that it described anxiety in adolescents rather than middle childhood. I think that same issue may have also limited the number of citations you were able to source. I recommend making a change to the edition of the DSM that was mentioned, as the DSM5 is the most current version. I didn’t find any grammatical or spelling errors and thought that overall your writing style was very clear and cohesive. The images and videos you used fit the topic well, though I would have liked to see something also from evidence based science. Regarding the question of whether or not the page would be useful for healthcare providers, I think it could be, though I think practitioners would prefer more evidence based science and a more technical writing style would suit that target audience. Despite these drawbacks, I thought you did a good job on your topic this week. 
Pete Hite, ATC, ITAT