Heaven Marculis

Hello Heaven!      I think you guys did an awesome job covering the main talking points for this section. I think that it is really interesting that you talked about how young children follow the eating habits of their mothers. I believe this will drive home the point that women and adults truly set an example for our youth. Yes, habits can be changed but if you instill good, healthy eating, fitness, and mental wellness early, there will not be anything to change. Of course, there will be bumps in the road but it will be life choice changes, not just a total transformation.  I really liked the YouTube videos that you used and think they helped to sell your talking points. I do think that you could have added a few more images that would help to break up the layout a little bit. This would just help with the flow and add some more color to the page. Since this generation is so technology-based, I think it would be awesome to also add some fitness application to...

Hello Heaven!       I enjoyed you and Kaela’s section for this week. I liked that you were able to present the connections of development between boys and girls with statistical research and current events. I would suggest to maybe try an expand your thoughts a little more towards just the impact towards females. Or maybe find a statistic that only females faced. Just to make the women stand out over the men aspect a little more. You were able to provide strong information but I believe that you just scratched the surface. The research your provided, I believe, allows your reader of the progress change and what parents or adults might be seeing within the changes of their youth. I also liked that at the end of the first section, psychological, you ended with a positive correlation towards ways to show growth and improvement which. As the health care provider, I feel sections and comments like that help to transition the research into clinical applica...

Feedback for Early Adolescence -Psychosocial Aspects of Mind and Body I'd like to begin by expressing by appreciation of the easy to follow layout of the web page. All headings and titles are clearly stated, followed by simple text that is effortless to read. The content was organized and followed a logical format. There were not many, if any at all, grammatical or spelling errors present. The videos offer great information, especially the one pertaining to why teens are moody. The video offers clear explanations that can be understood by anyone- even those not in science or medical driven careers.  The paragraph pertaining to the implication on health and well-being of early adolescence offered some distinction and differences between male versus female mental health, however I was hoping to read more. More information could have been offered regarding how early adolescence psychosocial health impacts interactions and outcomes with parents and teachers, a...