Feedback Unit 3

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Hello Heaven!

     I think you guys did an awesome job covering the main talking points for this section. I think that it is really interesting that you talked about how young children follow the eating habits of their mothers. I believe this will drive home the point that women and adults truly set an example for our youth. Yes, habits can be changed but if you instill good, healthy eating, fitness, and mental wellness early, there will not be anything to change. Of course, there will be bumps in the road but it will be life choice changes, not just a total transformation.  I really liked the YouTube videos that you used and think they helped to sell your talking points. I do think that you could have added a few more images that would help to break up the layout a little bit. This would just help with the flow and add some more color to the page. Since this generation is so technology-based, I think it would be awesome to also add some fitness application tools that can be used for this age group. I was a little thrown off with the random bit section of the implications. This would be another area that I would suggest adding an image of static to show that things can be improved and just continue the flow like the rest of the document. I enjoy reading all of the information that you and Kaela put together each week, I think that you ladies are doing a kick butt job. Keep up the good work.

Cheers,

Brittany Fredrick


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